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The rose war
I have looked beyond the steel point of my pen time and again in search of highland where I can rest as one who is enough. The wise terrain stands welcoming and wild and declares I too am painted with too many striking colors to arrive in peace and dwell, an invitation to war against what floats from my own mind into this quiet place. Stand, draw, and fight. The side of my palm a steady general riding deep in the page, curled hand a fist that readies for battle, thumb and fingers cradle the hilt of a sword poised to strike. Strike now with a cry arising from ancient armies that march within, war that echoes from the cavern of this writing hand, echoes from the shadows past each curled rose petal finger, a flower that trembles in the breeze, and written word appears a light aroma that floats among thorns, tearshed my only sacrifice, tears that water the page and the rose with the knowing that it is found in the steel point of my pen.
Thank you for reading! What strikes you, speaks to you, or stirs in you while you read this piece? I look forward to whatever dialogue happens here, and as always, I will be following up with a Reflection essay on how this poem emerged into being.
Brian
“an invitation to war against
what floats from my own mind
into this quiet place”
The battle we face in every blank page: to fight against self-doubt and find peace, to relax our grip on the pen and let the words flow.
I find this exquisite. I feel it so deeply. Well done.