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Dare I say, ‘a mindful’ poem:we save ourselves first and throw a life-belt to others, but don’t jump in and drown ourselves too!

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Yeah, another piece I like with this message is "Start close in" by David Whyte...check it out!

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Thanks for this, Brian. I have just copied this out slowly into my journal and then read it back. A strong experience.

"and there was a new voice"

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Nice. That’s one thing I haven’t done with this, write these pieces out. I’ll have to give it a try!

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"...the stars began to burn

through the sheets of clouds,

and there was a new voice

which you slowly

recognized as your own..."

These are my favorite lines in this poem. Thank you for posting this one today.

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You're welcome! That is a striking stanza for sure!

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