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Remember
There was that one you did not look back on and that one you did but then you shuddered and the one where you thought ahead but then were disappointed and that one where you planned and things worked out ok. There was that one you snuck away from at fifteen past Orion and the one that lodged in your mind like a fishhook and at some point you had to push it through and cut the barb to free yourself. And that one that showed up at just the right time with mower in tow and saved you from the municipal ticket and more bottled grief. What about the one where you were caught and told me you died but obviously you didn’t and the other one where you confessed and she left but your soul was healed and at some point she even noticed you were new. Do not forget the one where you wrote the whole story and filed it away for never knowing the ending was too perfect to be plausible and remember and write it down what you just told me. Write that one down.
Thank you for reading! If you are so inclined, leave a comment about what strikes you, speaks to you, or stirs in your memory while you read. I look forward to the dialogue that will happen here, and within a week I will be following up with a Reflection post on how this poem emerged into being.
Brian
What jumps out to me in this powerful piece is the line "but your soul was healed". So many times in life, when we let go of things or when we are, from no doing of our own, released from things, that letting go and release can be our source of healing and can bring change that we need.
Brian, what strikes me is just how simple, how powerful, and how perfect this poem, this being is that you created.