Maidenhair

[Pamela Leavey]

Brian, this poems evoked some thoughts I've been mulling on aging of late. Thank you for this lovely piece that spoke to my longings.

"Time is not the enemy, she declares"

"Age is timeless."

"To travel through time

and follow a path..."

[Brian Funke]

Excellent! Makes me happy when a few words that flowed through me also flow through you!

[Pamela Leavey]

Here we have an instance of “we are all connected.” :)

[The Sea in Me]

'beauty is food

for the wise' .

It surely is Brian, maiden, oh maiden, what a beautiful ode to her golden hair.

[Brian Funke]

I’m glad you liked it!

[Ann Collins]

Beautiful 💛

[Brian Funke]

Thank you Ann 🍂

[Ann Collins]

Glad you gave us this one, before fall gives way to winter . . .

[Nathan Slake]

As will all your poems, this is a beautiful meditation.

"and read the canyons in her trunks."

Love this line and all its meanings and imagery.

[Brian Funke]

Thank you sir!

[Frederick Fullerton]

So many good lines in your poems. I especially like

of white lnowing

on this black surface

of we

[Brian Funke]

Thank you Frederick!

[Leon Brown, Jr.]

Beautiful!

[Brian Funke]

Thank you 🙂

[Neil Barker]

Really nice imagery Brian. I really like the lines about the egret.

[Brian Funke]

Thanks! I like that stanza…the placement between the tree imagery did some sort of highlight on it…