Kinship: Part 6
I especially like the imagery of opening our eyes and how everything is stitched together as a quilt of kin as one mast. Very nice poem, Brian! I have enjoyed reading this collaboration between Katharine and yourself. Thanks for sharing.
Neil, thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed, this one is not my typical style, but it was fun to work on!
"stitched together
in each
different past,
human and snake,
forest and lake,
when known
quilt of kin
is one mast."
Wow! Playful yet perfect.
Doing some rhyming, not my usual style but it was fun👍
I’ve been thinking of the truth of eyes lately so I went, whoa, when i opened your poem. There’s truth there. Thanks, you two, for this series.
Thanks for reading! I’d love to hear more about what the truth of eyes means to you…
I especially like the imagery of opening our eyes and how everything is stitched together as a quilt of kin as one mast. Very nice poem, Brian! I have enjoyed reading this collaboration between Katharine and yourself. Thanks for sharing.
Neil, thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed, this one is not my typical style, but it was fun to work on!
"stitched together
in each
different past,
human and snake,
forest and lake,
when known
quilt of kin
is one mast."
Wow! Playful yet perfect.
Doing some rhyming, not my usual style but it was fun👍
I’ve been thinking of the truth of eyes lately so I went, whoa, when i opened your poem. There’s truth there. Thanks, you two, for this series.
Thanks for reading! I’d love to hear more about what the truth of eyes means to you…