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Bird watching
Laughs emit in the easy way we are each supposed to be, as if the song of the cardinal and the song of the robin were not written to harmonize. Styles of time decree so here we stand, one large flock on the edge of a marsh dressed in a great blue heron’s plumage. Of course, the heron is magnificent, that is not the question. The bright orange knife of a beak and wide set fire kiln eyes, the sway of the stately neck soft in wispy fringe, strength and icy blue of the back spread into wings of ocean feathers even a peacock would be proud of. Beauty but hunter in one stunning collection. But I am not a heron. Perhaps only one or none that converge in this place really are. Not all of us stand four feet tall and spread wings six feet tip to tip. Look closely at me and look closely at you. There is red hidden in the grey of the female cardinal’s wings. Robins even dress in layers and stay for winter. Crows caw with wisdom no one wants to hear. The hawk may be a loner but watch the way he climbs in circles without a beat of his wings. Flutter, flitter, float, fly. Bright, brilliant, pensive, prayerful. Cling, crowd, stand, soar. Open and free. Evermore.
Thank you for reading! If you are so inclined, leave a comment about what strikes you, speaks to you, or stirs in you while you read. I look forward to whatever dialogue happens here, and within a week I will be following up with a Reflection post on how this poem emerged into being.
Brian
Wow, yeah, so beautiful. I love the way this picks up and essentially takes flight itself by the end, with the change in structure and cadence. I'm sensing a seasonal shift in outlook here, too.
"and wide set fire kiln eyes," <hands down my favourite line, and I can almost imagine you knew I'd pick this one.
Reading this feels like watching a bird "Flutter, flitter, float, fly." I love seeing your poems in my inbox. I know it's going to make my day better!