A poem
Love your work, for some reason your poetry style reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke.
Just curious, do you have some Rilke favorites. I bought a collection last month, after memorizing “already the ripening barberries are red”…
That’s probably why this poem had that flavor.
His book, Love Poems to God. Is what I’m most familiar with.
That’s some high praise. Thanks! 🙂
Ohh so very lovely Brian. The end was a surprise and so beautiful! 😍❤️
Thanks Cynthia. A good turn in a poem is key, I’m glad it worked for you!
Just lovely.
Thanks!
This is such a beautiful poem, with each colorful stage bringing us closer to who we always were.
The intended interpretation 🧡
Simply gorgeous, Brian. Perfect!
Thanks Nathan! I should write a spring themed one for you down in the south!
That you should. ;)
I love the movement of this poem
Evocative! My imagination took flight. Thank you!
I like how you start each part of the poem with Autumn, Yellow, Orange, and then Red. Very nice imagery and context, Brian.
Thanks Neil, I appreciate you reading!
You're welcome, Brian - really enjoyed this poem.
Love this Brian. I was there, turning with them. ⚡
Excellent! Thanks for checking it out!
Every line here feels perfect. Pierces the heart. Thank you for sharing this beauty today, Brian!
I’m glad I did, thanks Jason!
Nothing like a good job of chronicling the inevitable, thanks.
Thanks Weston! I always appreciate you reading.
Really interesting form and structure. Delightful writing as always.
Love your work, for some reason your poetry style reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke.
Just curious, do you have some Rilke favorites. I bought a collection last month, after memorizing “already the ripening barberries are red”…
That’s probably why this poem had that flavor.
His book, Love Poems to God. Is what I’m most familiar with.
That’s some high praise. Thanks! 🙂
Ohh so very lovely Brian. The end was a surprise and so beautiful! 😍❤️
Thanks Cynthia. A good turn in a poem is key, I’m glad it worked for you!
Just lovely.
Thanks!
This is such a beautiful poem, with each colorful stage bringing us closer to who we always were.
The intended interpretation 🧡
Simply gorgeous, Brian. Perfect!
Thanks Nathan! I should write a spring themed one for you down in the south!
That you should. ;)
I love the movement of this poem
Thanks!
Evocative! My imagination took flight. Thank you!
Thanks!
I like how you start each part of the poem with Autumn, Yellow, Orange, and then Red. Very nice imagery and context, Brian.
Thanks Neil, I appreciate you reading!
You're welcome, Brian - really enjoyed this poem.
Love this Brian. I was there, turning with them. ⚡
Excellent! Thanks for checking it out!
Every line here feels perfect. Pierces the heart. Thank you for sharing this beauty today, Brian!
I’m glad I did, thanks Jason!
Nothing like a good job of chronicling the inevitable, thanks.
Thanks Weston! I always appreciate you reading.
Really interesting form and structure. Delightful writing as always.